Consumption

Consumption

A Poem by PhoenixDown

the point where you lose feeling or a sense of where the food is in your mouth
the point when it goes down your throat
the point where it becomes part of you
yet you lose all hold of it all together

© 2021 PhoenixDown


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Wow, a totally new way to look at consumptiion and being consumed. Now it's much more than a long time ago disease. But also a feeling of feeding without being fully aware of what is going on around us and inside of us... almost like just fuelling to survive or to merely exist. Crazy! Thanks for sharing.

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PhoenixDown
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I keep finding myself, only to lose myself again. However, I am working on that. Also, I often edit my pieces daily. I think that is worth mentioning. ****I have decided to turn Read Requests.. more..

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A Poem by PhoenixDown