Stomaching the truth

She was her own brand of candy

Pleasant at first

Succulent and sweet

But the more her name

Rolled off of your tongue

The more sour

And the more bitter

She became 

Reviews

[FlatLineBeauty]

Wow! Nicely written. Your point rings as clear as a bell. xo Winter

[Inda]

Fantastic! I can think of so many heartaches because of this. Great job!

[kublakhan27]

I've sampled this brand of candy in the past. Though I also admit that if the genders were swapped, it could allude to me as well. It sounds a bit like a depressed person. Nicely done.

[Anti Phalanx]

I really enjoyed this. Admittedly I can relate to it as well.

[AJ]

thats soooooooo hot... :*