Does his love make your head spin?

Does his love make your head spin?

A Poem by Phoen-ix

I'm sure at one point in time, I was someone's cup of tea. But now, I'm positive I'm someone's cheap bottle of liquor. I know you won't mind if I stay the night, but please don't mind if my body is not next to yours in the morning.
I'll be gone,
somewhere else,
somewhere that is higher than all of this. 

© 2013 Phoen-ix


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The first two sentences of this poem are simply incredible. They're powerful, personal, and philosophical. Those are the kind of lines that get poets remembered, and will eventually land you on many peoples' lists of favourite quotes.

Excellent work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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MAC
just flat out a powerful write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Too much time I have spent living your words... I am humbled. A beautiful description of the most dreadful and humiliating feelings we can have as we sneak out in the wee hours... Amazingly done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awesome poem I loved it first two sentences were very strong favorite in library

Posted 11 Years Ago


Why stay at all? I like this one, a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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AJ
I would rate this a 58614/100 but apparently I can't.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm a side effect from a night of bad alcohol; don't sweat it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow
i loved it!
Higher than this....magnificent...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Fantastic write that stays with you; pokes you a bit. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The first two sentences of this poem are simply incredible. They're powerful, personal, and philosophical. Those are the kind of lines that get poets remembered, and will eventually land you on many peoples' lists of favourite quotes.

Excellent work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love poems that paint a picture...and this one really did great work:D

Posted 11 Years Ago



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