Your Love Pains Me...

When loving someone hurts so bad

                                                Your love pains me

It puts me to shame

I can't even see

And somehow you're to blame

Your love scares me

I feel so terrified 

Petrified even

And it's you I blame

You make me love you

But sometimes it's me

Putting myself through

Situations you don't wanna see

Your love pains me

Makes me weak in the knees

I can never control myself

I don't think I'll ever stop

Loving you...

But through it all

Still..  

Your love pains me...

Author's Note

Yes...Another love poem. Bare with me I'm an emotional lovesick wreck at the moment (Sure you've noticed all my pieces have been about love loss and broken hearts) but I'm sure it'll pass...maybe...someday :(
Honest opinions please...just give it to me straight!!
Thank you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love and pain in the same words. Can happen.
"But through it all
Still..
Your love pains me."
I enjoyed the honest tone and good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aphy!]

Thank YOU for taking your time and reading it. Really appreciated it and I'm glad you liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Chidoriflower]

Awwww yessss. Love it even though it hurts. 100/100

[Aphy!]

Wow! Thank you very much ;) Glad u enjoyed it

[Chidoriflower]

You're always welcome ;) hehe

[Angelique]

Very emotional. Very mixed feelings, to love someone and yet they hurt you is the biggest thing most people go through and they need to leave or continue to be in the situation it is always hard

[Aphy!]

True words. But I finally got tired of it. So to avoid any further heartache I left. And As I left I felt a little free (And heartbroken because I'd lost my "forever".....but then I got me some chocolate and I was better) :D :D :D *Sidetracked a bit* Thank you so much for reviewing hey

[Kietsu Negative]

I like the general flow of the poem. I also like the mix between easy and complex words. It hits my heart were it hurts because i can relate.

[Aphy!]

Love hurts everyone hey. But thank you for reading...and reviewing ^_^

[B. Boileau]

Interesting style, kind of a cross between free style and lyrical. I like it, but it looses some rhythm.
Seems as though your beginning to become a specialist on this subject.
Time heals my friend
bill

[Aphy!]

Ooooh and I have a lot more!! But next time I'll try and write something different. But thank you so much for reading and reviewing Bill. Really appreciate it ;)

[Bear]

Love it a topic you can write about for a life time and still not solve its mysteries, so write on :~)
Who knows, you may teach the world something along the way and just maybe help other to build sound relationships. Good job, good luck, and good poetry :~)

[Aphy!]

Thanks for the positive feedback. But hopefully I'll be able to untangle myself from this web of love. And write about serious things like...FOOD! (I LOVE FOOD) :D

[Lavorther]

Some strong emotions here. Very relatable. I really liked it.

The text is centered, but the first four lines are off. Maybe you have some spaces at the end?

Your love scares me
I feel so terrified
Petrified even
And it's you I blame

This part felt a bit off to me, especially the sentence "petrified even". Upon closer inspection i realized it breaks the rhyming scheme you had going (out of four lined the second and fourth rhyme).

[Aphy!]

Yeah my text just started shifting and moving after I was done (I think I have a ghost) but I was just writing what came to mind. But thank you for the review. Once my laptop decides to stop going bonkers I'll get to it.