The Girl With The Black Heart

When loving wasn't even an option, darkness listened when you neglected me!

She's the girl with a black heart

So dark ... Yet pure in a way

So evil ... Yet good in a way

Messed up ...But still knows how to pull herself together

But she still loves

Hard

Fast

Too soon

Loving with no strings attached

UNCONDITIONALLY

She loves with no regret

But she seeks love where love

doesn't exist

Where there is so much hatred

Bitterness

Which explains the darkness

In her heart

Author's Note

In a very dark place. This was all I could come up with as I tried fighting the sorrow and heartache. Not my usual form of writing but I figured I'd be a bit different...
Well...you know what to do!

Reviews

[Mayank]

Sometimes, letting all go is very important....

[Johnny]

ah yes... unconditional love is best felt rather than given.. or some would say so.. great piece Aphy! xoxo

[Aphy!]

True words indeed. Thank u so much x

[Justine Johnston]

Different can be good! It's important to experiment with different writing styles.

I think you did good for this being "all you could come up with" haha but my favorite part

"But she still loves,
hard,
fast.
Too soon,
loving with no strings attached.
Unconditionally."

Even when you're feeling heartache, it's important to not harden your heart too much. There can still be trust, loyalty, and love. What would the world be without them? So love all and fall hard. Continue to love unconditionally.

[Aphy!]

I've actually grown after writing this piece. And I just learnt to not take anything for granted and that it really isn't a bad thing to love unconditionally ;) Thanx for the review

[Dash the Reaper]

Nicely written,every one needs love at the end

[Aphy!]

So true. Thanks for reviewing hey

[firabelle]

Um, a tad bit basic, nice contrast in descriptions, though!

[Aphy!]

Thanks hey. Much appreciated

[Dynafox]

I like the many depths to one person in this poem. good job

[Aphy!]

Thanks. Really appreciate the review

[dan]

Situations arise in a lot of our lives in which the love we project on others has no chance of being reciprocated, often times a product of hate-filled hearts on which we wish for happy sated love. Love does not always recognize the too many differences between the lover and the loved one. When that happens the love is destined for a bad ending. take care...dan

[Aphy!]

Thank you for those lovely and deep words. Hope you enjoyed reading
Aphy

[Emma]

Yes, everyone, no matter how black their heart is, loves something. It's part of our human nature.
This was a good subject to write about.

[Aphy!]

Thank you very much Emma

[Tomás Ó C..]

Describes the girl I wrote "The Rose Among The Weeds" about to a T... enjoyable read... sorry for the heartache that inspired it...

[Aphy!]

Really like to read it. And heartache is what inspires these beautiful poems. The learning and growing all the tears we got. But thanx for reviewing

[Tomás Ó Cárthaigh]

Its on my profile, or if you cant find it there is on www.writingsinrhyme.com my website!

[Aphy!]

Will search for it then. Sounds very interesting. And if it's anything like mine...I have a feeling I'd really like it

[Coyote Poetry]

Those black hearts. They are hard to awake. I liked the honest tone of the poem. The ending is true. A black heart is dead till he wants to be rebirth. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aphy!]

Thank you. Glad u liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.