It was only just a dream

When the love just runs out...the everything automatically makes sense!

Maybe my heart didn't really skip a beat, 

and maybe the twinkle in your eye was just the Sun reflecting weird, 

and maybe the feeling in my stomach was just not having enough for breakfast. 

And maybe I just thought it was love...

Author's Note

Not ur average poem...no rhyme scheme...just sharing my thoughts!

Reviews

[Bear]

I remember my mother telling my little sister when she was seven years old that the butterflies fluttering in her stomach wasn't love, Ha! Ha! Thank you for bringing that memory back to life for me, and thank you for posting so we all can enjoy it, well done my new friend :~)
About your title, in the way you are using ONLY and JUST they mean the same thing so you should use only one (It was only a dream or It was just a dream)

[Aphy!]

I'm glad you enjoyed reading hey. And honestly I had a hard time with the title because I felt like it was a bit too short. But...point taken, I was actually thinking about the song "it was only just a dream" and just went with it!

But anyway, thanx for the feedback
take care

[Abhilash Hegde]

For all what we may think, love may turn out the other way. Hehe! Very neat and comes across as a pleasant one. Short poems are always enchanting, for in little words and verses they convey all that one would imagine. Thanks for sharing :)

[Aphy!]

Thank YOU for reviewing! Means a lot

[Johnny]

short poems are always my favorite... they tend to deliver messages with precision... I like your work! I will read more!!

[Aphy!]

Thank you so much! Really appreciate it

[Stan Lee]

Nice poem Aphy.
Short, simple but meaningful.
A

[Aphy!]

Thank you so much!
Glad u liked it

[dan]

Aphy, Such super verse trimmed to four lines, excellent. There is so much emotion emanating from this plaintive explanation of how love can be tripped up and/or spit out. But having said that, again I am SO impressed with your ability to use emotion in your piece so damn well and effectively! I am saving this to my library favorites...that's how wonderful this is. take care...dan

[Aphy!]

Oh my! Thank you so much That means a lot coming from u because I think you're one of the mostttalented people here. So it really means everything to hear that you liked my stuff. Thanks again and I'm glad u liked it

[dan]

WOW, Thank you! There are so many amazingly talented writers on WC, I never could consider myself in their company. I'm very much flattered by the compliment. Thanks again! take care...dan

[Bluefire]

More like a quote, more like a thought pattern.
Sometimes those make the best poems.
Well done!

[Aphy!]

Thank you so much. Glad u liked it hey

[Bluefire]

You're welcome

[bathtime]

A feeling I'm sort of feeling right now. Brings me to a hard place. You describe it well. I really really enjoyed this. And I wholeheartedly relate to it right now

[Aphy!]

Thank you for reading. And I'm glad it touched u

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Your description strong and true. Love can make us un-balanced and crazy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aphy!]

Glad u enjoyed reading. Thanx

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Angelique]

That is nice, I think we have all had those thoughts at one time that what we thought was love wasn't love at all....

[Aphy!]

And beautiful things come out of those memories! Thanx for reviewing hey!

[Not here]

well i liked it all the same, even without a rhyme scheme. great job :)

[Aphy!]

Thank u! And glad u enjoyed

[Shadowkai]

Wow this is proof you don't have to ryhme to prove a point in your poetry great work

[Aphy!]

Yeah very true, as long as the message makes sense