It was only just a dream

It was only just a dream

A Poem by Aphy!
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When the love just runs out...the everything automatically makes sense!

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Maybe my heart didn't really skip a beat, 
and maybe the twinkle in your eye was just the Sun reflecting weird, 
and maybe the feeling in my stomach was just not having enough for breakfast. 
And maybe I just thought it was love...

© 2015 Aphy!


Author's Note

Aphy!
Not ur average poem...no rhyme scheme...just sharing my thoughts!

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I remember my mother telling my little sister when she was seven years old that the butterflies fluttering in her stomach wasn't love, Ha! Ha! Thank you for bringing that memory back to life for me, and thank you for posting so we all can enjoy it, well done my new friend :~)
About your title, in the way you are using ONLY and JUST they mean the same thing so you should use only one (It was only a dream or It was just a dream)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aphy!

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed reading hey. And honestly I had a hard time with the title because I felt like .. read more



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For all what we may think, love may turn out the other way. Hehe! Very neat and comes across as a pleasant one. Short poems are always enchanting, for in little words and verses they convey all that one would imagine. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aphy!

8 Years Ago

Thank YOU for reviewing! Means a lot
short poems are always my favorite... they tend to deliver messages with precision... I like your work! I will read more!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aphy!

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Really appreciate it
Nice poem Aphy.
Short, simple but meaningful.
A

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aphy!

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Glad u liked it
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dan
Aphy, Such super verse trimmed to four lines, excellent. There is so much emotion emanating from this plaintive explanation of how love can be tripped up and/or spit out. But having said that, again I am SO impressed with your ability to use emotion in your piece so damn well and effectively! I am saving this to my library favorites...that's how wonderful this is. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aphy!

8 Years Ago

Oh my! Thank you so much That means a lot coming from u because I think you're one of the mostttale.. read more
dan

8 Years Ago

WOW, Thank you! There are so many amazingly talented writers on WC, I never could consider myself in.. read more
More like a quote, more like a thought pattern.
Sometimes those make the best poems.
Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aphy!

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Glad u liked it hey
Bluefire

8 Years Ago

You're welcome
A feeling I'm sort of feeling right now. Brings me to a hard place. You describe it well. I really really enjoyed this. And I wholeheartedly relate to it right now

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aphy!

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. And I'm glad it touched u
I liked the poem. Your description strong and true. Love can make us un-balanced and crazy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aphy!

9 Years Ago

Glad u enjoyed reading. Thanx
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
That is nice, I think we have all had those thoughts at one time that what we thought was love wasn't love at all....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aphy!

9 Years Ago

And beautiful things come out of those memories! Thanx for reviewing hey!
well i liked it all the same, even without a rhyme scheme. great job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aphy!

9 Years Ago

Thank u! And glad u enjoyed
Wow this is proof you don't have to ryhme to prove a point in your poetry great work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aphy!

9 Years Ago

Yeah very true, as long as the message makes sense

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Added on October 16, 2015
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Aphy!

Pietermaritzburg, KZN, South Africa



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I'm Aphiwe Bhengu from South Africa. I really enjoy writing and reading. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE Anime and Manga! I'm a very optimistic person and I believe in individuality because the worlds too crazy alr.. more..

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