I remember my mother telling my little sister when she was seven years old that the butterflies fluttering in her stomach wasn't love, Ha! Ha! Thank you for bringing that memory back to life for me, and thank you for posting so we all can enjoy it, well done my new friend :~)
About your title, in the way you are using ONLY and JUST they mean the same thing so you should use only one (It was only a dream or It was just a dream)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I'm glad you enjoyed reading hey. And honestly I had a hard time with the title because I felt like .. read moreI'm glad you enjoyed reading hey. And honestly I had a hard time with the title because I felt like it was a bit too short. But...point taken, I was actually thinking about the song "it was only just a dream" and just went with it!
For all what we may think, love may turn out the other way. Hehe! Very neat and comes across as a pleasant one. Short poems are always enchanting, for in little words and verses they convey all that one would imagine. Thanks for sharing :)
Aphy, Such super verse trimmed to four lines, excellent. There is so much emotion emanating from this plaintive explanation of how love can be tripped up and/or spit out. But having said that, again I am SO impressed with your ability to use emotion in your piece so damn well and effectively! I am saving this to my library favorites...that's how wonderful this is. take care...dan
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Oh my! Thank you so much That means a lot coming from u because I think you're one of the mostttale.. read moreOh my! Thank you so much That means a lot coming from u because I think you're one of the mostttalented people here. So it really means everything to hear that you liked my stuff. Thanks again and I'm glad u liked it
8 Years Ago
WOW, Thank you! There are so many amazingly talented writers on WC, I never could consider myself in.. read moreWOW, Thank you! There are so many amazingly talented writers on WC, I never could consider myself in their company. I'm very much flattered by the compliment. Thanks again! take care...dan
A feeling I'm sort of feeling right now. Brings me to a hard place. You describe it well. I really really enjoyed this. And I wholeheartedly relate to it right now
I'm Aphiwe Bhengu from South Africa. I really enjoy writing and reading. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE Anime and Manga! I'm a very optimistic person and I believe in individuality because the worlds too crazy alr.. more..