Lying Loser

My first Drabble!

Today, I told someone that his mom died.

And I don’t know why I felt disgusted; besides, I only said that for the sake of winning the race. He’s gross. He let his emotions in the way of victory. I’m not like that. Definitely gross!

As I think that, I end up visiting my own mother’s grave. I brought a flower that I picked up on my way here.

Upon seeing her name carved in stone, my chest gets this disgusting feeling. I bow and put the flower in front of her tombstone.

“Disgusting,” I say as I walked away.

Author's Note

Feel free!! Could use the critique!

Reviews

[Ana]

AHHHH it's been so long!!!! Sorry, I've been working on more writing and school is just...did you know I finished a whole project like two hrs before i left for school? Who has time for this much homework? This is really sad, but I'm glad he told the person he was racing against a lie. It'd be horrible if his mom had actually died.

[Aphy!]

Lol Ana going crazy hey (Also been busy with school) But yeah it really is sad that he told a lie

[dan]

Yeah, a cheap way to win a race. I hope that this is fictional, and from what I know of you I'm sure that it is. A thought-provoking piece! take care...dan

[Aphy!]

Thanx Dan and yes it's fiction (I'd never stoop to that level)