Whisper

Whisper

A Poem by Chelsea (Jade)
"

Feeling old school.

"

A tiny whisper exchanged

only of the faintest sound

but heard loud and clear

And to my ears this whisper carries

those tender words

Meant for only me

© 2009 Chelsea (Jade)


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So much deeply expressed from so few words.. that's poetry!
A beautiful song from the soul, enchanting.





Posted 15 Years Ago
Very cute and simple
And it's true it's only for your
ears to hear

Nice job

Orlando M

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love things like this. Terse, concise, and meaningful.

Posted 15 Years Ago
This is a tenderly put short piece, effective in every right.

Posted 15 Years Ago
Awww, this is beautiful. You are a very gifted writer, Chelsea.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful, warm and well expressed poem of a moment to remember. I enjoyed this!

Posted 15 Years Ago
Short and effective. I loved this little poem. I saw a girl with her lips placed by a boys ear whispering to him. Very good.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on April 27, 2009
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Chelsea (Jade)
Chelsea (Jade)

I don't live in a city. I Live on a planet.



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