Heartbreak

Heartbreak

A Poem by Chelsea (Jade)
"

I found some old work of mine while cleaning my room.

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Take me or leave me here

Your voice

it'd be so clear

If you were here

with me

 

Make me shed a tear

Hold me to stop my bleeding

But do you really love me?

But do you really love me?

 

Your red stained hands hold truth

Your so cruel to say that

 

Hope burns away,

leaving scorch marks on my heart

Making me sick.

 

 

© 2009 Chelsea (Jade)


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awesome and sad if experience...well expressed dude

Posted 15 Years Ago
'leaving scorch marks on my heart' i loved how you showed the pain that love is in one perfect sentence which stands by itself. This is a beautiful little poem that i really enjoyed reading. Maybe a few more commas would work better making the mind read it slowly and take more time but that is just a suggestion it is very, very good now.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Chelsea (Jade)
Chelsea (Jade)

I don't live in a city. I Live on a planet.



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