Made of Porcelain

Made of Porcelain

A Poem by Chelsea (Jade)
"

IDK, just something that came to mind.

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If my lips were like stone

would you still kiss me?

If my eyes were like blackholes

would you still say they were pretty?

If my face was made of glass

would you still be cafeful?

If I were to break

would you fix me?

 

© 2009 Chelsea (Jade)


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Chelsea (Jade)
Eh...

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Short, which conveys a vivid image

The last lines were amazing:
"If I were to break
would you fix me?"

I also loved the rhythm in it, great write :)


Posted 15 Years Ago



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I don't live in a city. I Live on a planet.



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