Never

Written towards the people that make the ones I care about cry.

Never let them harm your heart

For you need it to live

Never let them take your voice

Cause you need it to speak

Never let them hurt your feelings

Cause feelings drive you

Never let them make you cry

Cause obviously they don't care

So never ever never ever

Let them Harm you.

Reviews

[poetic soul]

wow.... lovely write... motivating too.. but dear, is it really possible to "never" do it?
after all, we all tend to fall again n again in the same bloody pit and hurt our self...
at least in my case, even after telling myself a hundred times, i end up doing the same mistake over and over again...... there is no escape i guess!! but i really loved the simple words here carrying such deep emotions...keep it going on.......

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Somebody you've already..]

wow. amazing write. never ever is a powerful thing to say and i think u used it perfectly in this poem. u r an absolutly amazing writer, and i look forward to reading more of your stuff.

[Wunderlich]

I like this. It's displayed in a simplistic structure, yet I really like it. Although it can be hard to [i]never[/i] let harm come through. Still, I liked it :D

[Bexers]

I honestly took this to heart.
Thank you for writing this.
It was amazingly put & I related to it all very well.

Keep it up!!