Intwined

Intwined

A Chapter by Chelsea (Jade)
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An encounter with a weirdo. This could be interesting. (Gonna post part of it to feed your curiosity)

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Walking through the mall I would've never expected to meet someone that would later be the biggest thing to happen to me since I discovered awesome music. Anna, Conner, Althea, and I were all hanging  out infront of some store that smelled like incense galore. Just acting goofy like always. Perhaps if Anna didn't shove me into him I would've never met him. (Thanks Anna) He caught me as I was falling into him and I looked up.

"Sorry, my friend shoved me." I said looking up and regaining my balance. He shook his head and grinned.

"No problem, I'm just happy to have caught you." I couldn't put my finger on it, but there was something about him that made me stare at him. Anna coughed to let me know that I was staring and I broke my gaze.

"Well, thanks a bunch." I waved and was surrounded by my friends who shoved me as we departed from him.

"Wow, that wasn't weird or anything Thaila." Anna cracked. She elbowed me. Conner and Althea laughed as they held hands. I rolled my eyes.

"If you didn't shove me...well...nevermind that was pretty cool." I blushed slightly.

"OH! A crush, huh?" Anna poked. "Well good thing he goes to our school and all."

"WHAT?" I asked, my face becoming even more red. I still couldn't get the image of his face out of my head. He had chin length not-quite-black hair, super blue eyes, and he was just gorgeous beyond belief.



© 2009 Chelsea (Jade)


Author's Note

Chelsea (Jade)
PLease keep in mind that this chapter isn't finished.

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wow this is really interesting. i definately look forward to reading more.

Posted 15 Years Ago
I like what you have here....much better than twilight....i like twilight and all but this seems like a much better story.....you should read some of mine...i think you'll like them....anyway there were a few mistakes in the first chapter......send me a message and i will tell you the mistakes....im sure you've noticed them already though...haha....I cant wait to read more of this :D

Posted 15 Years Ago
I really like what you have! Very addicting and catchy! Much different than Twilight. I like it!

Posted 15 Years Ago

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