Alice

This is one of the characters from the story I'm writing.

A young lady with a robe of a deep blue danced as if her partner was there to lead her, she danced her slow dance between the trees that stood mighty tall and let little sunlight inside. The lady's face was covered by the hood of her robe,but as she gracefully danced her silver hair flowed from the sides of her hood,as she spun it to went with her. Her delicate hands up as if holding a partner's hand,as her face was turned towards you,the flash of her purple eyes captivated you. She danced and danced until she faded away,her hands and feet slowly became translucent and her robe remained until it too faded into the forest.

Reviews

[Kuro]

I enjoyed this little introduction to your character. Would you tell me what one of your stories she is from? I just might have to read it ^-^
"slowly became Translucent and" capital in the middle of a sentence?

[Philppa]

This is from the story i'm writing called Cold Diamond. She's a later charcter in the story but you can still read the story on my profile :)
That was a typo,haha thank you for pointing that out i'll fix that.

[Kuro]

Hey np xP I make typos all the time.... some more then others and thx for letting me know ^-^ I'll start reading now =D