The Window of My Heart

Untimate gift ...

The Window of My Heart

Dancing delights flit and flutter

Basis of this emotional life

Where deepest and sincerest emotions

Most susceptible to pain reside

 

Protected by inner strengths and essence

Displayed through the window of my heart

And clearly seen all vulnerabilities

I have entrusted for your eyes only

 

This is more than a loving gesture

Frangibility of persona is at stake

To unquestionably give all to another

Is a gamble I’m willing to take

 

Phillozofee @ 2008

Reviews

[*** Hey Jude***]

You speak from the love within your heart that is more than special. To be able to relate with someone on the level you are able to is a gift. Many don't understand that when you really care for someone there is nothing that can't be trusted, nothing that can be worked out, nothing that is impossible with the true Love given from the greatest lover of all...our God! I would say yur odds are good my friend.
Wishing you much Peace, Love and Happiness ~ Jude :-)

[Ladysue]

Beautiful. This is love at its truest!!!! You described this feeling flawlessly and as you say it is the "ultimate gift". Gorgeous piece of writing. The depths of this kind of love is something to treasure. I loved this piece!!!

[Norma J. Jessee]

Yes, to take someone into your heart, being open and honest, offering unconditional love does put one in a very vulnerable position. It is certainly a gamble but as you said one that you're willing to take because love is so worth it. As you say it is the "ultimate gift"

You have beautifully described a loving relationship in which a person feels so loved, so accepted, and so safe that they can share their innermost feelings, dreams, failures, successes, without reservations, where you can totally be yourself, be accepted, understood, trusted and respected as a valuable being.

This is going to my favorite's to be read again and again.

[Gandré]

oh my dear Phillip, what a wonderful present...she must be wonderful and the image really your words so soothing...gave it a wonderful touch. I love the metaphors and see the same thing happen here with the I would love to see more of this beauty. Middle stanza was my favorite. thank you darling for posting this.

[Ally Baker]

wow! great poem. i know that this sounds cheesy and over used but still, this was very deep. This is a wonderful poem. It was very well expressed with a great and very easy flow to it, all the lines fit together and went with eachother as if it were nature's orders.

i just have one question about it.. in the line "This is move than a loving gesture" do you mean for it to be more than a loving gesture?
i just wasnt sure. so i decided to ask you, but besides that i totally loved this poem, its a freatly written poem,

good job! keep up the work!
Luhv,
Ashley A.

[Tainted Angel]

Wow, why can't I write that deeply? Great poem, though truly, I must admit, my male is showing, cuase I don't get it. I kinda feel like a blonde. Maybe if I read it enough, I'll understand it one day.

[Dani California]

Indeed this is the ultimate gift....
to entrust your very soul to another...wow

"This is move than a loving gesture
Frangibility of persona is at stake
To unquestionably give all to another
Is a gamble I'm willing to take.."


And therein lies.... LOVE. :)

This is a wonderful poem, beautifully expressed
and penned!