Illusionary Love

All was not as it seemed

Illusionary Love

Fabricated perception

Of misinterpretation

Deceived one in believing

You were there for me

 

Phillozofee @ 2008

Author's Note

In Dodoitsu genre ...

Reviews

[Gandré]

but of course this is what Illusionary love it. So many live in it. Wishful thinking - dangerous with a concrete person. On the other hand, isn't it exactly the way it is? we don't try to adapt our idol to a tangible person but the tangible person make suitable to the idol. could this be wrong? ... loved your philosophical insight once again... beautiful..

[Ladysue]

You said a great deal in just four little lines. I agree with Gandre..."so many people live in it" Very insightful piece. Excellent!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

nice. tells a lot in a few sentences. Could be expounded on into something longer even. nice job. i liked it!!

[Valentine]

This kind is love is just like a bird chirping in the wind..Heard but not felt and soon gone..So many people learn this simple fact of life while living ..God bless..Valentine

[xlynne]

so sad. so perfectly articulated. your last two lines really hit home for me

[Fabian G. Franklin]

this is quite bitterly sad, a very good write though i am unfamiliar with the genre