Ineffable Desire

Dodoitsu genre ...

Ineffable Desire

Aspects of self existence

Inherently have revealed

My words are not sufficient

Silent hearts triumph

 

Phillozofee @ 2008

Author's Note

"Whereof one cannot speak, thereof one must be silent." - Ludwig Wittgenstein (1889 1951) Austrian philosopher who worked primarily in the foundations of logic, the philosophy of mathematics, the philosophy of mind, and the philosophy of language.

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

Well 'Luddie' was correct! People should practice "shut up" and the world would be a better/quieter place to live in...I have a philosophy of my own...if you don't know what to say...say nothing...
Loud and clear message,
Nicely done in a difficult genre (I can't believe I understood it...did I?)
Helen :-)))))

[Ladysue]

wow, i read this a couple of times...very well written and so true...excellent!

[xlynne]

i think this is about as perfect a poem as they come by. there's something about it that i just really love. i think its the line third line when you said: My words are not sufficient because that is so often true, for desire as well as many other feelings.

[Bonnie]

It took me a couple times reading this to 'absorb' it.

I wonder if I read it again I might get something new?

I like it, short with depth of meaning.

And I just got your name shift - Phillozofee - philosophy! :-)

[Chaos]

I find I've found the more silent I am, the more I learn. I loved this piece, the flow was nice and soothing, but the message was profound. Great write!

[Gandré]

Hm, silent hearts triumph always for love is not about seeking but being found. The absence of sound is great for lovers; I believe when people start to know each other it is better to enjoy together kind of silence. When there are too many words, a heart can't to process for there is not the component 'time'.....
So, this Ineffable Desire how you call it - would remain silent and growing in its stillness of your heart.
A wonderful composition, you are a master of dodoitsu!! Thank you for reading my new poem - Hearts Of Gold, dear friend Phillip. love u always, L.Gandr�