I have come to prefer longer poems, so I can hardly ever be satisfied with just one haiku/senryu. But of all those at the cafe who do these short forms, yours are always the most fully-packed & brimful of thought-provoking ideas. To me, this is the point of the short form . . . the most bang for the buck (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
I have come to prefer longer poems, so I can hardly ever be satisfied with just one haiku/senryu. But of all those at the cafe who do these short forms, yours are always the most fully-packed & brimful of thought-provoking ideas. To me, this is the point of the short form . . . the most bang for the buck (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Oh how perfectly well you describe infatuation Phill. Yes, it is too much. Too much everything and in a short space of time it becomes too intense. Does your head in, stops you eating, prevents sleep and yet at the same time can be exhilarating and exhausting :) Would I wanna go there again? No, it's for the young at heart.
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..