we are in the midst of change...and even with the flaws, it feels so good to finally
have some peace...
Life needs to calm down for awhile.
the frenzy of rant poems, at least for me, gets tiring.
This poem is so good, Phill...starts with the chaos, ends with us floating in the calm.
j.
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
What can I say Jacob - your review is so generous - thank you my friend ... :-)
we are in the midst of change...and even with the flaws, it feels so good to finally
have some peace...
Life needs to calm down for awhile.
the frenzy of rant poems, at least for me, gets tiring.
This poem is so good, Phill...starts with the chaos, ends with us floating in the calm.
j.
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
What can I say Jacob - your review is so generous - thank you my friend ... :-)
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
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