I wish I could read your poem in terms of actual intelligence imparted. What you say is true, period. But then there's the mind-wander about how prevalent conjecture has become as part of our public discourse, & on & on, so your succinct observation ignites the very conjecture so many are on the verge of spouting (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Intuition relies on the subconscious, but if we have been raised with incorrect knowledge, or prejudice, or hatred, then our intuition shouldn't be trusted. This is a fantastic haiku.
I wish I could read your poem in terms of actual intelligence imparted. What you say is true, period. But then there's the mind-wander about how prevalent conjecture has become as part of our public discourse, & on & on, so your succinct observation ignites the very conjecture so many are on the verge of spouting (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Obviously, my intuitions cannot be trusted...
My knowledge is extremely imperfect.
But so many of us will try to spring these intuitions as sacred word anyway.
j.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thanks my friend - I appreciate your feedback ... :-)
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