Golden Ink ...

Golden Ink ...

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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A "Golden Age" is known as a period of peace, harmony, stability and prosperity.

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Golden Ink ...

 


 

Drops of golden ink

Fall from your quill of mystic words,

And scroll a manuscript of intrigue

Across the parchment pages

Of my velum bonded heart.

 

A tale of dreams to be

And promises of passion unconditional ,

Pulse through this body’s veins

Like streams of molten love

To reach extremities of spirit.

 

It’s true the story’s plot

Is ancient as time’s rhythmic tempo,

A never ending intricacy of momentum

Yet from life’s diary of encouraging reward

I see an imminence written in the sand.

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee


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I'll have to agree with Helen. To see you writing in this genre is a pleasant surprise, and you are really good at it, I might add! I love the whole theme of this-the golden ink writing on the vellum heart...Enamoring! Your ability to branch out shows your diversity as a writer and your unlimited talent! Thank you for taking the time to share!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Beautiful combination of words. It feels timeless. Excellent!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful. wow.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really like the flow of this oz... good job ^.^

-s.e.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely love this piece. A beautifully written poem with great imagery. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this can be taken in many different ways. The golden ink could be expressing words of love, the words of God, or even just the appreciation of a reader to a writers words. Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Drops of golden ink

Fall from your quill of mystic words,

And scroll a manuscript of intrigue

Across the parchment pages

Of my velum bonded heart.

That is beautifully written!! Love every word of it. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with SM Davis. It is always a pleasure to read your work. Excellent writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A rapture of promise...pulse...and something perpetually passionate

no surprise in this to me...

Blessssssssssssssss

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

a beautiful piece... great job

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Phil, you've done a fantastic job with this. I am always so pleased to see a request from you....because I know that I will walk away from it feeling much more peaceful than before I read it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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