Golden Ink ...

A "Golden Age" is known as a period of peace, harmony, stability and prosperity.

Golden Ink ...

 

 

Drops of golden ink

Fall from your quill of mystic words,

And scroll a manuscript of intrigue

Across the parchment pages

Of my velum bonded heart.

 

A tale of dreams to be

And promises of passion unconditional ,

Pulse through this body’s veins

Like streams of molten love

To reach extremities of spirit.

 

It’s true the story’s plot

Is ancient as time’s rhythmic tempo,

A never ending intricacy of momentum

Yet from life’s diary of encouraging reward

I see an imminence written in the sand.

Reviews

[Carole]

I'll have to agree with Helen. To see you writing in this genre is a pleasant surprise, and you are really good at it, I might add! I love the whole theme of this-the golden ink writing on the vellum heart...Enamoring! Your ability to branch out shows your diversity as a writer and your unlimited talent! Thank you for taking the time to share!

[Karen]

This is a beautiful poem. I especially love the word choices, carefully strewn together, so perfectly and so carefully. The first stanza drew me in (I measure a poem's worth by its first stanza) and the rest of the poem did not let me down. Thank you.

[Genevieve]

This is quite simply beautiful. From first to last your verse and prose flow gracefully both from the lips and through the mind inspiring the most lovely imagery. Wonderful as always. Thank you for sharing : )

[Kathleen Marie]

This is lovely. I like all the imagery and the flow is smooth.

[gmwoody22]

"...my velum bonded heart." This is the essence of true writers. You rock. Keep it up. Expand. Expound. Write.

Cheers,
Glenn

[Zane Mathias]

I really Like this one. the meaning strumms strong throught the whole piece. Great write. B.P.

[Greg the Bard]

The last line ileaves something to be desired. It's a great line but sand reminds me of the seashore. As the tide comes in the line would be washed away leaving the reader of a thought un-finished. "I see an imminence written in the sand". The poem is so intact that I had images floating all around from each sentence. Wonderful write.

[Sandra K]

AAAAWWWW! How sweet! I love the flow and the poem, and the love you have. How beautiful!

Thanks for sharing!

Sandra K!
xoxo

[pal]

Sharp n brief.. well said.
pal

[Barry S. Maltese]

Nicely done. Great imagry - used well to convey your meaning

[The Archangel Gabriel]

I love it! It flows with tender magnificence! Carole is right - this genre fits you and allows you to shine! Keep it up, friend. Thanks for the read request!

-Gabe