Fool Am I ...

Fool Am I ...

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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For a contest

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Fool am I ...




Glancing over my shoulder

I caught her staring out the windowpane,

It stopped me in my tracks

My soul spellbound once again,

From cascades of silken amber tresses

Dancing down a porcelain fair face,

To frame those pastel eyes of powdery green.

 

And pressed up closer to the glass

I noticed parted trembling lips of rosy pink

Mouth undecipherable words towards my heart

For it was not rain running down her cheeks

But teardrops I had caused for being rash

Fool am I to cause such needless thoughtless pain

So running to her arms, I fled again!

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee


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( Look darling, its Phil Oz O'fee, the craftiest poet there since Pablo Neruda they say. What do you think darling? Should I hate him? ..."You don't even know him."...I know, that's true, but there's just something about him, something around the lines; reminds me of...ME! No...I'm sure of it, I hate him. ) lol lol great job on this, just feeling like Holiday today. :o)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is just simply beautiful. The emotion, the imagery, all of it lovely.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww I hope you win :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hope you won or at least placed. This was good. Fool am I to say so or not. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks for sharing this poem with me! Like with all of your work, I was really impressed with the words you used. It was like I was reading this poem from classic poem book or something.

This poem seems to have the theme of abuse towards women, but I can't be sure. You did a really good job with reconciling, I can tell you that much. XD Thanks again for sharing this!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

( Look darling, its Phil Oz O'fee, the craftiest poet there since Pablo Neruda they say. What do you think darling? Should I hate him? ..."You don't even know him."...I know, that's true, but there's just something about him, something around the lines; reminds me of...ME! No...I'm sure of it, I hate him. ) lol lol great job on this, just feeling like Holiday today. :o)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Right on Phil! Nice contest entry. I hope you do well. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written. Good luck with the contest... unless I am in that one as well. Then, "Die, die, die! 1,000 deaths upon you!" Lol.

Peace and love,
Gabe


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A really insightful romantic piece. Eloquently written of a bittersweet moments. Great imagery in this piece. It gave the reader a perfect feel.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a fool should we all be....

Wonderful Phil! Simply put and just wonderful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful and romantic piece. Nice job!
Sandra

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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