This write is for the deep minded ONLY... it pulls out a cynical side of me that just laughs and laughs... I know all too well where so many well-minded individuals spend their moments...their thoughts-- and how into ruts they are-- The common person simply forced to "drone" on in the land of "numb" ... This piece is unfathomable for them. So, here I am, reading it, and I am moved, taken out of the common arena that much farther, and to think that I could be missing out on eternity???? It just hits me square between the eyes. Thank you for the ponder Phil!
~Lorraiyne
Yes, we should not take our time in moving on, for time slips away from us all too quickly. I enjoyed this Phill as I do all your work. It is intelligent and powerful in meaning and form. I particularly liked your contradiction on eternity being a short time...very clever.
Cheers,
Helen :-)
Okay, I have to be honest...You have totally lost me, Phill. I don't usually have a problem with your poems, but this one went straight over my head. :-)
Interesting, Phill. So reading me brings you towards a new creation :). Yes, always quickly, the change might not there be again. Be well. I am reading the Pynchon newest book. There is no other writer who would be so near to my thoughts. Did you ever read?
Time is a relevant thing that is left to each individual. To some it is now or then, slow or sped up. Sometime, time can come to a stand still or as this says roll by us if we don't grasp the chance...
"As far as the laws of mathematics refer to reality, they are not certain, and as far as they are certain, they do not refer to reality." I still like pilate's question to Jesus, "What is truth?" great write.
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..