Oh yes, that's it. Nicely done! That's what we are, we have a special bond with words in mutual affection. -you English native speakers like Haikus and Senryus, here they aren't so popular. Interesting. On this way I want to thank you for your edition, what you sent me, I took something. _Anne did this for me, too. She edited, she is such a perfect editor for me, for I learn when she is making her suggestions - I know exactly what was wrong. Thanks Phill for that edition and - as always, a wonderful poem.
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..