Best Friend

To all my Cafe' comrades ...

Best Friend

Trustworthy obverse

Sharing passionate closeness

Of allied life force

Phillozofee @ 2008

 

Reviews

[Gandré]

Oh yes, that's it. Nicely done! That's what we are, we have a special bond with words in mutual affection. -you English native speakers like Haikus and Senryus, here they aren't so popular. Interesting. On this way I want to thank you for your edition, what you sent me, I took something. _Anne did this for me, too. She edited, she is such a perfect editor for me, for I learn when she is making her suggestions - I know exactly what was wrong. Thanks Phill for that edition and - as always, a wonderful poem.

[SM Davis]

Oh that all relationships could be this way. Yes. truthfully ... as it should be.

[Danielle Asher]

how important it is to have people close to us. You always sum things up so powerfully and so eloquently in just so few lines.

[K.Rena]

Haikus not very good at them myself but a fan of those who can beuatiful description of the truest of friendship

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Very nicely written. There really are a bunch of very special people here and a wonderful sense of community.

It makes me feel bad that I have been laying kind of low lately. I just had some important R&D to do, and I had to pick up some time somewhere.

Luv,
Gabe

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Aww... that was sweet! I think it's very nice that you'd dedicate a neat little haiku for your friend's here. ^^ The second verse definitely made a lot of sense to me: not many people are too keen to share their most personal or guarded to complete strangers. :P Thanks for sharing this; it was very sweet. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Lorraine Pearson]

Sweetly said in so few words. Much to think about...thank you my friend.
~Lorraiyne

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Here, here Phill, where can I get me one of those? Finding these qualities in someone would be something wonderful! Thank you for this, I hope I am counted among your friends...I'm the tall one at the back...
Cheers,
Helen :-)

[Kelley Pascoe]

Great senyru Phill! Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[J. Hampton]

" Allied life force"

Ilike that...

you are the king of senyru

Blessssssssssssss

[Gina Laurie Whitford]

Simple and sweet