Best Friend

To all my Cafe' comrades ...

Best Friend

Trustworthy obverse

Sharing passionate closeness

Of allied life force

Phillozofee @ 2008

 

Reviews

[Gandré]

Oh yes, that's it. Nicely done! That's what we are, we have a special bond with words in mutual affection. -you English native speakers like Haikus and Senryus, here they aren't so popular. Interesting. On this way I want to thank you for your edition, what you sent me, I took something. _Anne did this for me, too. She edited, she is such a perfect editor for me, for I learn when she is making her suggestions - I know exactly what was wrong. Thanks Phill for that edition and - as always, a wonderful poem.

[Karen]

I absolutely love Haikus, especially when they are so beautifully expressed as in this poem.

[Audrie]

Hiya! I must say that I absolutely enjoy your simple yet powerful statements. I recently took an indefinite break from a close friend and I wish she could read this piece of work! These are very true and powerful words.....peace, balance and harmony

[Kathleen Marie]

Very well done haiku... Very visual.

[Greg the Bard]

You hit the nail on the head with this one. I like the lase line the best. It sums up each and every one of us.

[Zane Mathias]

Great write- you really pick out the right words to say so much with very little

[pal]

A nice definition.. very brief one.

great.
pal

[Jennifer Ryan]

Thank you kind sir!!

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

indeed those are the characteristics that we look for in a best friend... great insight -

[BLFK]

You hit it on a best friend. I agree with this. You got it. Good job. Simple, but I love things that are to the point.

[Sheila M]

Nice....to the point. Well done.