pretty and nice to read, you now how to write about this again and again, and give us more! but in universe there is no balance; it might be a wishful thought finding it, your man of war is here and there and everywhere maniacally manically minifoldly active. soon there will be a change I believe. and what do you think?
Wonderful piece! I agree that one tiny rift of chaos in the fabric of the universe can cause catastrophic events in the entire universe and possibly extending to other universes and thoughts of reality. And yes, the tears from the dawning of insanity flow forever and throughout all forms of life. . . from destructive human actions to the trees, fields, water, sky, deserts and so much more. . . you are right -the deterioration of our current earth - residence - is definitely going to be one of the most difficult, painful, and tortuous challenges that we humans have ever endured. However, I have unwavering faith in the universe and believe in it's never ending desire to nurture and cradle us throughout this journey. I found this poem to be very powerful and want to thank you for sharing your awareness with us. peace, balance and harmony
I'm not sure "Esoteric" is the right word but it has a load of Oximorans incorprate in it. "Non dimensional tranquillity" is very interesting to me. I defined that sentence as a "Moment in Time". Well done
I love this- i dont know if you relized but if you took the first line off of each stanza it would make a poem in itsellf.
Laws laid down-
Non dimensional tranquillity,
Inconceivable to imagine,
a Millenniums of tears
The enormity of the challenge
A predestined sacrifice, to restore the balance.
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
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