Angelic Mist

Mist is the phenomenon, of tiny droplets, suspended in air.

Angelic Mist

Small dancing droplets

Suspended in melody

Singing in the air

 

Phillozofee  @ 2008

Reviews

[BLFK]

I take it you like to write short poetry. . . Well, I've only read two of your pieces, and observed they were both short. I like that factor very much. Sometimes I can be reading poems for minutes and minutes, and that frustrates me. I want to say, ''Let's get to the point, people!'' Anyway, I liked this. I love your style of expressing your view on things. Very unique. Keep up the good work,
BLFK

[Valentine]

Now this one I really like. It makes a lot more sense than some of this style of writing does.Have you tried the other style of this type where the sentences are numbered by sylables too? God bless//Valentine

[Phibby Venable]

this is very beautiful, Phil..perfect. I love the singing & suspension.
I can see the delicate of it.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Ahhh, this reminds me of my poem 'The Morning Mist' yet you have been able to capture it in much fewer word with such dignity. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha