Attrition (times three)

Tripple bill senryu ...

Attrition (male)

Moan moan moan moan moan

Moan moan moan moan moan moan moan

Moan moan moan moan moan

Attrition (female)

Nag nag nag nag nag

Nag nag nag nag nag nag nag

Nag nag nag nag nag

Attrition (conclusion)

A broken rapport

From abrasive arguments

Will end in sadness

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2020

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is THE MOST original & artful & snarky & truthful way that I've seen it explained WHY I never married (or lived with anyone) in my 64 years. As the youngest of 9 siblings, I saw my older siblings get married & divorced, married & divorced multiple times before I came of age. This is exactly what I saw. Being a chip off the old nag, I was pretty sure I couldn't improve upon it, so I left it alone (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Briana O'Connor]

love the originality. the beginning is quite humorous and then you end it with a clear description of the message in so few words. very well written. thank you for sharing. best wishes to you.

[Chris Shaw]

You get the point across here Phill wonderfully well. Love the illustrations too. Sensible discussion is far better but do we take heed? I fear many don't. Good to see you posting again.

Chris

[Wendy Sue]

Relatable...seems the rule book for relationships inevitably come in volumes when they all lead to the same thing, loss of soul connection

[Marina]

I can't disagree with your senryu. Even if i did, who needs the moaning and nagging? Very relatable wisdom, Phill. 💛

[AJNJ]

I do one better! I nag them worse than they can me. It always ends in a good place for me.... :)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

This explains why mine rapports always end in scratching and biting! Love these clever senryus!

[X]

Oiy... of moaning and nagging and other intriguing human activites 🤔I like your style 💯

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you Kira - so pleased you enjoyed my write.. :-)

[X]

My pleasure........:)