Knots

Knots

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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*sigh*

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Knots




Along our lifeline

Past transgressions are like knots

We can’t untangle


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© 2020 Phill Oz O'fee


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Strange things are knots: even though created in one or another specific way, they can still vary. Tensions too loose or too tight, of course.. and whether or not tied by a right or left=handed person.. one can be held captive for hours. Rather like being tied in knots by words said, a taut lost route, too many doubs as to how to interpret! You so often find few words to create a tome, Phill! This is no exception, sir. So hope life is walking a peaceful path these days. Take care, keep safe. Please.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Indeed, that can be the case. Of course, Alexander the Great didn't try to untie the Gordian Knot. He simply unsheathed his sword and cut the sucker in two.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Great review my friend; reminded me of this...

Turn him to any cause of policy,
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A very striking message and one well illustrated by the attractive artwork to go with it. Appreciated fully!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review my friend...:-)
AJNJ

4 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
Like growing into a bigger bigger ball of tangles.We learn from mistakes but can't undo them right?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Absolutely... if only we could learn from our mistakes .. but *sigh* ... not always the case... than.. read more
This is just what I like. Few words saying more

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Brevity is a secret weapon 'me thinks' - thanks for your comment friend... :-)
Wow! This is powerful and so beautiful! Love your chosen pic! Very effective!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Ahhh... a purrr-fectly lovey review.. thank you... :-)
oh dear you should see mine i have knots on my knots on my knots:/ but the good thing is if I start to slip back down I have plenty of things to hold onto:) besides who likes a straight line they are boring my friend

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Ha ha ha ... great response to my write...be safe and well my friend... :-)

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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