You use word puzzles to express yourself & I was having these "dawning" experiences, as I read your words, then the meaning slowly becomes more & more clear & relevant to your overall message. Love the sound of this phrase & many others: "speculate to accumulate" & that entire stanza is so spot-on. You are very good at expressing recognizable ideas in unusual ways & I love originality. Going on 63 this year, I find that when I had more money, I was much less happy . . . now I'm poor & the richest I've ever been! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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I embrace you right back my friend and appreciate your kindly review - we get too soon old and too l.. read moreI embrace you right back my friend and appreciate your kindly review - we get too soon old and too late smart - bless... :-)
I loved the way you used the word nought here..To be honest , first I was congused because I have always used this word in my maths or physics class..I agree with you the best things in life are free..This world would have been a far more wonderful place if humans would have chased happiness , love and joy instead of money..Howsoever rich you may become , you can never buy love..I loved this poem..Keep writing Phill Oz O'fee..This poem brought a smile on my face...
Take care..
Riddhi.
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Thank you so much Riddhi, for your kind review and poignant words - तुम्हें आशी�.. read moreThank you so much Riddhi, for your kind review and poignant words - तुम्हें आशीर्वाद देते हैं … :-)
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Awww...That's so cute..You are European and for me you typed that in hindi..I am feeling so happy..T.. read moreAwww...That's so cute..You are European and for me you typed that in hindi..I am feeling so happy..Thank you so much dear...
great play on words and flow....and yes...the best things in life are free...but why do we do such awful things to get richer and richer....for what? we can't take that with us when we leave this earth...love we can...joy we can...experience we can.
j.
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Thanks Jacob - wise words! Just as a matter of fact; SUPER-RICH Brits are having their brains frozen.. read moreThanks Jacob - wise words! Just as a matter of fact; SUPER-RICH Brits are having their brains frozen after they die in a bid to be reborn in the future. They are paying a fortune to have them cryogenically preserved in liquid nitrogen in the hope of a new life. But it doesn’t come cheap – having your grey matter frozen for up to 200 years will set you back £80,000. Some are paying £200,000 for full body preservation, where they are hung upside down in steel cylinders. Boy are they in for a shock on ‘Judgement Day’... :-)
You use word puzzles to express yourself & I was having these "dawning" experiences, as I read your words, then the meaning slowly becomes more & more clear & relevant to your overall message. Love the sound of this phrase & many others: "speculate to accumulate" & that entire stanza is so spot-on. You are very good at expressing recognizable ideas in unusual ways & I love originality. Going on 63 this year, I find that when I had more money, I was much less happy . . . now I'm poor & the richest I've ever been! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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I embrace you right back my friend and appreciate your kindly review - we get too soon old and too l.. read moreI embrace you right back my friend and appreciate your kindly review - we get too soon old and too late smart - bless... :-)
The powers that be would like us to believe that the best things in life are free...it's only because they haven't figured out how to tax them... ;p)
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Fresh air tariff - now there is a thought - but only if politicians pay hot air duty! Cheers for you.. read moreFresh air tariff - now there is a thought - but only if politicians pay hot air duty! Cheers for your review Ted...:-)
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If we taxed political hot air we'd all get massive tax breaks. ;>)
Nought, is such an expressive word. On occasion I toss it around.
You have cleverly written a plain simple truth. That some of the richest people I know live paycheck to paycheck.
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Thank you Cherrie - lovely review! I friend of mine used to say he loved to breath in the fresh sea .. read moreThank you Cherrie - lovely review! I friend of mine used to say he loved to breath in the fresh sea air - because it didn't cost him anything *sign* .. everyone to their own … :-)
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..