A Christmas (acrostic)

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A Christmas (acrostic)

     Love Crafts fresh optimism

And the Hearts of many

      Will Ring out its goodness

Bringing Into a cold darkness

  A light So heavenly pure

That all Those who witness

      Are Moved to tears of joy

Sensing A peace so profound

    Each Soul shines more brightly

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Louis McKraker]

Now this is super cool.
I've never seen acrostics done inward of the first letter of the first line.
Seems like it took a lot more brain work doing it this way.
Cheers! I always fiend for things I haven't see yet, and you satisfied that.


Thanks for that.

[Onlyme]

Beautiful, perfect and inspirational poem. Phill The true meaning of Christmas.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you Dawn - a lovely review! :-)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Amen dear Phill. This is a beautiful, inspiring acrostic filled with the light of Christmas grace and joy. Much needed in this world now. The picture is wondrous. Love the symphony of your magnificent words.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Very considerate of you to say so Annette; Thank you with smiles and a ho ho ho … :-)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Ho! .......Xo

[Chris Shaw]

Beautifully penned Phill. A fine acrostic with a message of hope for the season, especially Christmas.

Chris

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Many thanks Chris, for your lovely review (only 4 weeks to go) - bless you … :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and amazing poetry my friend. Christmas is the time for us to be with family and be thankful for what we have. Thank you Phill for sharing your words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you my friend - Tis that time of year; but wouldn't it be nice to feel this way all year 'round - :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

We need to. Make everyday for concern, kindness and love. You are welcome my friend.

[Ardra]

Beautifully done Phill....and the in between Christmas looks like hard work....
So kudos...for that....

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Very kind of you to say so - and - it did take a bit of planning to mix structure with context, but well worth the effort - :-)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Oh my GOODNESS .... I love this... perfection !!!

Very well done.. touches the heart..

Jazzy

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Humbling remarks - and - most welcomed (PS the avatar distracted me at first - then read the comments) Thank you … :-)

[J. J. Nightingale]

HA HA... You are most welcome..... :)..............

[Fran Marie]

A well crafted acrostic poem with an endearing message of Christmas joy and goodwill..tis the season for all souls to shine indeed ...nice work...

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Great comments Fran - thank you for your kind words - :-)

[Fran Marie]

you're quite welcone;

[Naomi Wicks]

I absolutely love this, it flows effortlessly even though you've obviously worked hard to make CHRISTMAS run through the poem. You wouldn't know the words were chosen to fit that purpose, it's great!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you so much Naomi - it was a good exercise in word/letter placement - very pleased you loved the piece … :-) bless ...