Singular Small Speck

I'm rambling again...

Singular Small Speck

Ergodic thoughts

Drift across a blank parchment

Like tumble-weeds

Blowing over desert sands

Kicking up

Granular poignant words

Cognitive cogitating

Intermingled with imagination

Brings order

To random raw creativeness

And suddenly

Expressive style becomes sane

Visions appear

Taking shape upon the folio

Each line

An animation of my mind’s eye

Positively sharing

The inner workings of noesis

How powerful

Even a singular small speck

Written down

Amongst a multitude of text

Positively projected

Can effect destiny when read

Once again

I strive for perceptibility

Rewriting scratchings

To hone this gift bestowed

Clandestinely fermenting

The birth of another page

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I can definitely see how this description has the essence of what I perceive to be your writing style, kind of an uninhibited love romp with words that you do. I love the theme of this, how one speck can mutate into the most amazing otherness. I start my poems with one sketchy phrase & it amazes me what grows out of that. Anything in life, even a squashed self-esteem can grow into an amazing sculpture of beauty when given unselfish attention. This is one of your best poems that I've read (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[HadesRising]

Very well written piece of poetry. Well Done.

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Thank you for sharing your rambles. I enjoyed it.

[Amanda Trerotola]

Beautifully spoken! I loved the way you constructed your poem.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you Amanda - so pleased you liked my write :-)

[Chris Shaw]

You always use such wonderful language in your writing Phill. I imagine you thumbing through a thesaurus to select with care. Each poem starts as a grain and progresses. I like that idea.

Chris

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A very gracious review my friend - thank you for reading … :-)

[Kelly Scheppers]

If this is considered "rambling", than I've a lot to learn! Extraordinary, Phill.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thanks Kelly - I try my best to post creatively … :-)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

A poem is so eloquently born in this write Phill. Great language, imagery , theme. Love this.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Very kind of you to say so Annette - thankyou :-)

[George David Hope]

Think this poem sums up all of us...we all start with a blank sheet of paper and then bit by bit, letter by letter words appear and not long after a master piece is staring back at us. Really liked and thanks for sharing with us

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you - your comment are very much appreciated … :-)