Aboriginal Absurdity

Taking what is NOT ours to take …

Aboriginal Absurdity

Entity awakes

And feeds on native birthright

To possess Eden

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i think this is an incredible poem to read to a study group ..so many nooks and crannies and side roads one can take ... adding the pic increases the spooky scary quality ... the birthright of Eden??? wow! such a discussion :) beautiful, social sarcasm ... many layers .. such a fully packed senryu .. well done says i!
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[Phill Oz O'fee]

Humble thanks my friend - glad it caused a stimulation … :-)

[Gandré]

To whom belongs the Earth?

[Judy Emery/ Lilly Emery]

It is clear and straight to the point, I like the image you put to bring out your haiku.

[KCthelastboyscout]

Sounds familiar.Oh yeah I live here...America

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you my friend - the country is great - pity its being abused by a few egomaniacs … :-)

[Neville]

True & no laughing
matter evident, real or
imagined. N

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thanks for your insightful review my friend … :-)

[Neville]

No problem, my pleasure..

[Onlyme]

Now, this really is an eye-opener. A great piece. Really makes you think and ponder.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you Dawn - glad it inspired a 'ponder' - bless … :-)

[Onlyme]

Phill you always make exceptional senryu and poems in general. Talented and clever.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

***blush*** … need a glass of wine now - thank you again!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

wow wow wow
not just cos im in australia and an aussie but because it shows your empathy from a far off land i think you are in uK right? have u ever visited here or lived here.
what an empathatic poem to the way things turned out back when cooke discovered oz. wow wow wow is all i can say
beautiful picture beautiful words
now to look up the first word in the dictionary lol
seriously yes! i love it

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you so much - very inspiring review :-)

[Kelly Scheppers]

A senryu of epic proportions, Phil. Stunning in both mind and imagery!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you Kelly - very nice review my friend! :-)

[FaeryQueen]

whoa friend, images abound in this short snippet of a poem

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you for your kind review :-)