Obsession

Obsession

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Too much thinking about what one can never obtain … :-(

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Obsession



Overwhelming urge

For impossibilities

Erodes sanity


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© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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Absolutely, obsession is just as you described. Its crossing the line of sanity. And entering the world of delusion. A very unhealthy way one can be. Nicely put Phil

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but impactful. Love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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This is one of your most impactful of the short formats I've read of yours. This is the kind of idea that explodes into a bigger deal once it hits the reader's mind. Your limited syllables are well-crafted to employ the expansion effect which marks a brilliant senryu (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Short, sweet and powerful emotions. Come flooding to mind on reading this and so very true. Phill, erodes sanity does obsession. Eloquently expressed to perfection my I add. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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but how about insanity? would it be reversed?
Muchly enjoyed the pondering thoughts in my own head.


Posted 6 Years Ago


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yes that is the truth sometimes there are things which we should not entertain and think about maybe to preserve sanity in the end

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing truth but eroded sanity is sanity...🌹

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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