That Look

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

Hummmm ….

That Look

With pouting moist lips

Smouldering eyelids flashing

My shield was disarmed

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee

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barleygirl

Your poem is gracefully stated, even tho I disagree with the premise that make-up is integral to a woman's beauty (it seems your words & picture imply this). Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago

EcstaticEuphoria

No truer statement could ever be made. Attraction is the undoing of many a string resolve and has broken the rules many times. I love the delicateness in the selection and the last word to bring it home. Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago

AYVID N

Beauty disarms, subjugates and wins. Who said life was fair? It just has to be beautiful. Lovely senryu with an equally breathtaking pic.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

A look which would make most red blooded men tremble in their boots. Not surprised your shield was disarmed:))

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anand Sehgal

Very terse and very effective write :)
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Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ardra

mmmm seems like a good thing
to get disarmed this way :P

nice pic btw...
(her lipstick looks hot.. i need that shade...)

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on July 18, 2018
Last Updated on July 18, 2018

Author

Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

About

I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..