Breathtaking

Breathtaking

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Private beach adventure …..

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Breathtaking



They share a secret hidden beach

Secluded from populace’s eyes

Their towel of natural fibre patterns

Lay strewn ‘cross the golden sands


The lapping waves played tunes

Across smooth pebbled glassy shore

The only other sounds to perceive

Admirations of their unique amore


She was succulently succumbed

To each sweet corporeal whisper

Stroking seductively gentle upon

The nakedness of her exposed neck


And gentle butterfly wing kisses

Descending soft on shoulders bare

With deftness impressive pleasing

Stimulating her velvet vellus hairs


Masculine smooth hands slipped subtly

Affectionate around her trembling waist

As explorer’s tongue teased erect peaks

To moans of extreme elevation pleasure


This lover’s expedition still underway

Forged deeper depths for treasures

In circular motions of skilled fingertips

Brought her near superior fulfilments


‘Twas moment that two became as one

Unfettered fervour flowed fluidly fast

Their rhythmic motion now equivalent

To the ocean’s crashing cresting waves


And as if by predestined proclamations

Simultaneously they summated passions

Collapsing draped in ecstatic entwinement

Soaking up a breathtaking summer’s love


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© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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I enjoyed reading and depicting the detail of the piece specially. All the scenery and the lovers dwelling in it have been portrayed so amazingly. this is something I would love to read again and again. Great!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Summer love, sounds lovely in this poem. Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Summer Love on beach.... sounds wonderful Phill...
Breathtakingly hot... steamy... and Mmmm
Everything you can think of ....and more at a beach... perfectly captured in your words...
Almost like the picture.... :)


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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