Birthdays

We all have them - and - can't avoid them … :-)

Birthdays

Another milestone

Some to be celebrated

Some to forget

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[splattercore]

Makes me sick to think that every year comes another year of disappointment. You are no where closer to the goals in your life. Even if you make new ones, you're right back where you start. It's probably better to drop everything and forget what you're working so hard to get. Maybe. Or maybe you don't have to live life to other people's standards. Either way, it's not up to me to decide how you live your life and you can't dictate what to do with mine. We all make our choices and we will dig our own graves. Just accept the fact that there is no point in trying when you can't get the job done. But you can keep on trying.

Nice piece! I'm loving the images these three lines are expressing.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thanks for your interesting comments - glad you connected - :-)

[splattercore]

Of course!

[Aaron]

birthday is the most celebrated day of any ones life
loved those 3 lines

[Riddhi]

Even in just three lines someone can express oneself so beautifully , I never imagined it...You are a great writer...Actually birthday brings me joy but I also feel that it means one more year less of our life!!!!
Keep on writing...

[flaco]

a lot said in three lines

[Ardra]

:) mmm nice cake Phill...
Thank you..... For sharing yummy cake..
You need to wait few more months to eat yours...
What's it gona be ... double layered dark chocolate... ;)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

More likely multi layered - yummy - :-)

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Before any comments to the poem I'd like to stare at the luscious cake!!
And the poem is what we should learn in short..,great read...thanks for the cake!!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you so much … :-)

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Wc😊.....!!!