Murmur

Murmur

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Absent Friends ……..

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Murmur



Even

In your absence

Reverberations

Of your creativity

Pulse

Through my heart


Rhythmic

Throbbing passions

Pump

The essence of you

Around

Psyche central veins


Vigilantly

As I wait your imaginations

Reserves

Are borrowed upon

From

Precious memory cells


Pending

A reunion of like spirits

Patience

Will be the order for today

Until

Osmosis of our words


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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This is the best description for the way I feel about someone who’s missing from my life. I still feel his vibrations, as if he’s right here with me, maybe even guiding me on a few things (which has been very helpful). I love the way you describe how a person’s essence can come across, regardless of their physical presence. There’s so much more we don’t know about force fields (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you Margie - your words are always a blessing … :-)



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I loved this..And the way you expressed your emotions so beautifully in this poem..It actually brought image in front of my eyes of a person who misses someone...
Keep it up and well done..
Keep on writing...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful. While reading this I felt overwhelmed by emotion, primarily longing for such a friend to be a part of my life. You truly are gifted with words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Your moving review has touched my heart - thank you so much … :-)
This is the best description for the way I feel about someone who’s missing from my life. I still feel his vibrations, as if he’s right here with me, maybe even guiding me on a few things (which has been very helpful). I love the way you describe how a person’s essence can come across, regardless of their physical presence. There’s so much more we don’t know about force fields (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you Margie - your words are always a blessing … :-)
A wonderfully well written heartfelt tribute to absent friends. Very nice Phil


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review :-)
I am in love with this poem. Good job!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Very nice f you to say so … tank you … :-)
she is part of you and a apart of you is her, water finds its own level eventually as will like spirits come togethr..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you my friend - :-)
When memories die.. a heart grows cold.. and stops.........

Well done... deep !!

Jazzy

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

My grateful thanks for your kind words :-)
J. J.  Nightingale

6 Years Ago

You are welcome..............♥
Mmm waiting :)
Ah seems they will be back soon...
Keep writing.... once they are back they will be happy to find you have been thinking about them...
Nice heart felt poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for your review - :-)
Wonderfully said. A fine tribute to absent friends. Worded by a true poet.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind comments Chris - :-)
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

You are welcome :))
Wonder poweful memories can help heal a lost and broken heart.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review my friend - :-)
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

I really feel the power of your poem resonate within, thank you Phill.

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Added on June 25, 2018
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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