Unrequited

Unrequited

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Rejection sucks ……..

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Unrequited



Feelings can get hurt

If love is left unanswered

Hitting a stone heart


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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Mmm....sometimes we are under the impression that how sea waves...after a lot of trial manage to break the wall.... just like that we are also capable....
But then maybe sometimes we are....otherwise it's just an illusion we create...to go on...isn't it Phill...


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Stupid review sent before incould finish it :( anyways... I remember my unrequited love for the most popular girl at my school. It was awful. Idk if she liked me or not bit now this poem makes me wonder

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, unrequited love. I remember when I had unrequ

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love these little short and to the point poems. Sometimes you don't need all those words to strike to the truth of the matter. Nice one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You wrote it beautifully Phill and the picture seemed perfect here...And actually feelings are hurted when love is left unanswered...
Keep on writing...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The photo gave a good illustration to describe your words...raw and tragic. Excellent write in just a few words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mmm....sometimes we are under the impression that how sea waves...after a lot of trial manage to break the wall.... just like that we are also capable....
But then maybe sometimes we are....otherwise it's just an illusion we create...to go on...isn't it Phill...


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 24, 2018
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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