‘Twas you … again

Just a fictional theme … wondering through my head!

'Twas you … again

T’weren’t the scruffy old tom cat

Screaming at its own reflection

In the stagnate garden fishpond

Kept me from gettin’ any sleep

‘Twas you … again

The stale peanut buttered bread

‘N greasy bacon straddled topping

Ain’t the source of my gut bubblin’

In the way it has been just lately

‘Twas you … again

Skull’s a busting from pain rumbling

Causing one huge soreness in my head

Like lightening smashing stones apart

‘N only entity I can point my finger too

‘Twas you … again

My piston blood’s a pumpin’ so fast

It’s like every vein is gonna explode

The pulsing just painful in my chest

This happenin’ to a throbbing heart

‘Twas you … again

Susceptible sinew of my very persona

Has been infected by happenstances

As I undergo a steady creepin’ over me

For strange symptoms can only mean

‘Twas you … again

The solitary treatment I believe will aid

Lovesickness epidemically befalling me

'Tis to intravenously transfuse your juices

Into unfilled consciousness and psyche

‘Till you … again … renews me

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[AYVID N]

To me, missing someone I really miss is one of the most irksome and even painful sensations I can think of. I can relate very well to some of the sensations so aptly described here, especially gut bubbling, head aching and heart pounding in the middle of sleep. A very real and convincing write.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Many thank yous' my friend .. :-)

[AYVID N]

It is such a pleasure!

[LKBillips]

Man this girl sure has some serious physical side effects. lol. I like it. Drawn in so completely to another can leave you short of breath and absent minded for sure.

[Delainie Broaster]

I definitely see beauty in this original piece.

[Beccy]

That first verse is a killer; left field but so apt and the rest of 'the wondering through your head' matched up.

Great and clever use of our language; most enjoyable.

Beccy.

[Ardra]

The solitary treatment I believe will aid
Lovesickness epidemically befalling me

mmm does solitary treatment really help ... :)
a difficult one to cure this epidemic...:P

[phill..m]

A poem with a meaning to all with a subtle injection of the barnum effect.

[송지ፏ..]

Very nice, but it was hard to read since English isn't my first language. I liked it after I read it several times and understood it.

[Ghost]

This is a poem of missing someone and longing for them in every possible way... Living with the haunting phantoms of that love... Thank you for sharing

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Your comments are most welcome :-)