Sipping Sensuality

Exotic cocktail ………..

Sipping Sensuality

Placed purposefully about her boudoir

Three hundred lily-scented tea lights

Cast minutiae petite dancing shadows

Upon embossed red wallpaper strips

A Derek Rose cashmere dressing gown

Hung trophy style on a clandestine door

With a large beige Persian Kirman rug

Flattering solid hardwood polished floor

Amber and dragon’s blood incense sticks

Fashioned an atmosphere of anticipation

Every sensual aspect of staged ambience

Screamed wanting for special attentions

Upon soft gold embroidered chaise longue

Reclined In translucent nightgown of silk

She smoulders pure mystically raw radiance

Whilst serenely sipping cocktails like milk

An anticipated click from wild garden gate

Announced arrival of her keen fervent lover

Thus knowing the moment has drawn near

She welcomes passionate masculine cover

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[BrittZurg]

I love the adjectives and nouns spun together to paint such a detailed picture in my head, I don't find imagery like this in today's writing works. Amazingly refreshing, with subtle rhyme's leaving the imagination to do it's work but also providing a flow that I've always appreciated and adored in poetry.

[AquaWater5674]

Enchanting..
Adornment to the senses...
Inviting...
Dangling thoughts envisioned in one's mind..
You can...
Smell the Incense..taste the wine...
You want to linger on thechaise lounge...
Just a little bit longer...
Very pleasant piece..

[LKBillips]

Nicely painted scene. Very wanton and inviting.

[Kay]

I love the title. There's a simultaneous softness and elegance to each stanza's imagery. The line "Three hundred lily-scented tea lights" sets such a nice scene. Well done!

[Moonie]

Your poem flows so smoothly, and i love that you've chosen such gorgeous words! Good writing!

[emmajoy]

Those were the days when women knew who they were... and you've gathered that time and placed cues under every sub-heading exquisitely. You could design sets for theatre, turn history on its head et al.

[Ghost]

Wow such beauty in the words you write to bring this poem to life.... You found such beauty while describing her and the room she is in... Thanks for sharing

[Ardra]

Sounds like a mountain lioness... :)
Awaiting her prey...