Timed Response

At the right time …..

Timed Response

In a foolish world

Staying calm is challenging

Patience is vital

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I couldn't agree more. With the world and all its problems and inequality we don't do ourselves any favours by ranting and raving. It might be challenging to stay calm, and patient, but that is the way to go, to get the best results. Nicely expressed, and I love the little image. It's really cute.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this...good advice...although i am growing quite impatient with this world of ours.
solitude allows for that calm...

[Giulia King]

Patience is vital, indeed. Love how short this poem is but full of wisdom!

[Just Kim]

No doubt, you sure have this right!
awesomely said.

[Crowley]

Whoa, this a little bit of truth in a can. Patience is not my best trait, and staying calm has gotten easier as I have gotten older, but still a difficult burden to shoulder at times. With pinpoint accuracy as always....great job.

[alanwgraham]

I cannot disagree Phill. Sometimes the obvious eludes us so well done for highlighting this truth. I would just say that it's not the world that's foolish but I'm sure we all know that. This would be a great writing prompt!
Stimulating!
Alan

[Phill Oz O'fee]

perhaps I should have said; "In a world with fools"! Thanks for your comments and review :-)