Brain Pain

Brain Pain

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Too much thinking ……….

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Brain Pain



Ohhhhh … dear!


I am beginning to think

That I might be thinking

I think too much these days


Could be a valid problem

If I let it be a problem

Leading to even more problems


I will have to stop thinking

Or that might turn my thinking

Into a great big real problem


S**t … my brain hurts!


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© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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I am smiling. Sometimes this happens to me. I get deeper and deeper into the well of thinking, until I can't reason clearly at all. Everything becomes muddled. Then I think, time for a nice glass of wine, that'll do the trick, and do you know what? It usually works, relaxes me. One glass though, nothing more. (and only if it is after twelve noon)

Chris

Chris

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So much truth lies in your words,wish sometimes I could just turn my brain off ;-]

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I feel your pain. Very well written, Phill😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Oh my sure can relate big time to this poem. And problem. thinking to me. Great job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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My brain hurts whether I think or not (& lately I don't do much thinking)! *wink! wink!* This is actually a good spoof on some of the postings I read in the last few days . . . many young writers are thinking too much & getting tangled in their words. So even if this is a bit of kidding fun, as with all joking, it's based on truth! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Sounds like my wife worrying about having nothing to worry about > never ending worry

Posted 6 Years Ago


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The Brain pain happens ever so slow and becomes a big headache! the best thing to do to thaw the block of ache is, to take a nice nap!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I am smiling. Sometimes this happens to me. I get deeper and deeper into the well of thinking, until I can't reason clearly at all. Everything becomes muddled. Then I think, time for a nice glass of wine, that'll do the trick, and do you know what? It usually works, relaxes me. One glass though, nothing more. (and only if it is after twelve noon)

Chris

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol..... :p
Mmm I sometimes think my brain will explode into tiny pieces... :) Bec of my thought process...

Very relatable poem..Phill... :)
Love the pic...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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