Reciprocal Pleasures

Fell from my fountain pen after an exchange about breakfast … curiously inspired write!

Reciprocal Pleasures

Her alabaster soft silken skin

Shivered at his tender touch

Exciting pheromone arousal

From entwining of like desires

Follicles anatomically triggered

Exploded in passion pleasures

As sweet mutual explorations

Searched each craving crevasse

The contrast of his masculinity

Against yielding feminine form

Complimented inner wanting

In reciprocal rampant response

How adroitly love time passes

Wrapped in each other’s arms

Until both exhaustible collapse

At crescendo of their fervour

Having gorged on ripe emotions

They collapse into quiet ambiance

Entwined into a passive singularity

And drifted dreamily off in slumber

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

An energetic and hot little number you have created here, full of passion (and envy). Exhaustion as a result of lovemaking, how positively divine. "Having gorged on ripe emotions", what a wonderful line. Your poems always please.

Thank you

Chris

[Eva]

Well written. Enough to excite your pulse and have you imagining the scenes described in your poem. "Her alabaster soft silken skin" "Shivered at his tender touch", were great lines. Beautifully expressed.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Phil,
For sharing this romantically entreating verse of sweet biological sensuality.
Thought I smelled smoke! I don't know what was in that breakfast, but wish I'd had some, too … LOL!
Great favor and enjoyment was found in the syntactic flow and imagery you so masterfully rendered, and your descriptives in metaphor bring it all simmering to vibrant life.
Reading down through each line, I envisioned the girls onsite queuing and elbowing each other out of the way. : D
Ck V4 and 5 for repeat "collapse", V4 L3 "exhausted", V5 L2 "in" a passive singularity, and L4 consider omitting "And" in V5 L4, dreamily off "into" slumber (just constructive thoughts shared you might like and use). Super picture choice … whew!

Whatever, this is one I wish I could have written … a beaut! ⁓ Richard ; )

[sette]

so passionate, so romantic... i need more adjectives to describe the poem.. it is totally hot in here

[emmajoy]

Our present weather is far too warm for yet more stoking of the fire, Mr. O'fee! However, that said you do lay the hearth extremely articulately.

[Ghost]

Very good poem and it has the steam turned up here with the heat I felt from those words you have written... Thank you for sharing

[Ardra]

Aren't you turning on the oven here with all that heat ...360 degrees...
Goodness ... I think I am going for a cold shower lol