Chocolate Covered Comfort

Chocolate Covered Comfort

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Comfort food?????????????

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Chocolate Covered Comfort



A tasty majestic creation

Coming in many forms

Dark and milk plus white

Considered to be the norm


Bitter, sweet or flavoured

Chucky, powdered or smooth

I’m in love with every one

And that’s the ‘gospel truth’


Pumpkin spice my favourite

Envelopes of truffle heaven

Found this chocolate delicacy

Deep in the heart of Devon


With no limit to concoctions

From herbs to toasted bars

Existing in all size and shapes

Including some bonbon stars


So whenever the proverbial

Sometimes hits my life’s fan

I indulge in choc binge comfort

My surreptitious yummy plan


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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Ahh...the golden wrapper of Cadbury is heavenly and the melting chocolate is my fave...oh you didn't do right by making me remind about chocolate.....how will I control myself from emptying the whole box of chocolates in the fridge?!😁
But yeah am a chocoholic!!
Thanks for sharing😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Willy Wonka & the Chocolate Factory - film with Jonny Depp (2005) - bless :-)
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6 Years Ago

Mmm....I gotta watch😊!!!!!!
emipoemi

6 Years Ago

Dude, no! Gene Wilder (1971) all the way!



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Yummmm. Our chocolatier made pumpkin spice truffles where I use to work and they were delightful. My favorite! There really are so many different combinations and flavors. This is enjoyable to read and really makes me crave chocolate!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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This is one of my favorites of yours that I’ve read so far. As I remember, your poems are often kinda short. But this one is longer & that’s why I like it so much. Your wit & playful storytelling deserves to be enjoyed for a longer time! *smile* Good job on rhyme & rhythm, but mostly the imaginative details that don’t fall into the gutter of cliché (not easy when writing about something so universally worshipped). The proverbial fan is stated deliciously subtle *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I'm not particularly fond of certain chocolaty flavours out there, but I'm always down for a good bar of "dark, milk, or white" (mmmmmm). That right there is "the gospel truth"! (lol) Much enjoyed this poem! Nicely crafted! "chucky" I believe is meaning to say "chuNky" (with an 'n'), but this is quite the concoction you've written about it! That last stanza really puts over the top! Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I only eat dark chocolate cos scientific research shows that it's good for one.. Pity my nose grows by the day,, dont think there's cure for ir, either. As ever a fine poem put together with apparent verve and bite.
'Surreptitious yummy plan' - finishing with a tasty linguistic flourish too.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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You know there's a word for this.its called addiction.but what a wonderful sickness !! 😊😋

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I used to work in Thornton's many years ago, and oh boy did i indulge :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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i love chocolate but pre diabetic.
I occasionally sneak in a cadbury caramello bear or a dark chocolate square before or after work with coffee yummo love your poem!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Thornton's Continental for me, (when I can afford them,) ; usually though, maltesers, taste divine and great fun as well.

Beccy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chocolates are my weakness. Not a guilty pleasure if I don't feel guilty about eating them! I feel like I could already smell and taste chocolates by reading your wonderful poem. Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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OMG chocolate wow my achilles heel i love them dark chocolate and those with almonds

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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