Hourglass of Life

Hourglass of Life

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Time passes .......

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Hourglass of Life



Grains of breathing sand

Flowing down a shell of glass

Symbolizes life


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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The trickles as they fall slowly with speed yet stopping each sense of each second- reminding us as each grain falls that if not awakened it all becomes an oasis where one can drown if not aware of the breathe of air we are given but don’t always appreciate- wonderful words🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


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totally true our life can be compared to an hour glass and the sand in it represents all the trials we have to withstand and surpass

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Love the analogy and the concept comes across very clearly. Much enjoyed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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love how you make the grains of sand come alive...
and how time symbolizes life and vice-versa...we are so ruled by it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mmm very philosophical one Mr. Phill.....
Do you ever wish if you had the dagger of time..
To have the powder to go back and change things..... ..the one in Prince of Persia...the sands of time

You should add a sad song too ... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you - I may take up your challenge :-)
Ardra

6 Years Ago

For a minute I thought what is he going to search for the dagger :p

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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