Hourglass of Life

Hourglass of Life

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Time passes .......

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Hourglass of Life



Grains of breathing sand

Flowing down a shell of glass

Symbolizes life


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© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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The trickles as they fall slowly with speed yet stopping each sense of each second- reminding us as each grain falls that if not awakened it all becomes an oasis where one can drown if not aware of the breathe of air we are given but don’t always appreciate- wonderful words🌹

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This represents the passing of time for me. And those grains of sand seem to move quicker with the years. Very visual with a deep meaning. Well done.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The trickles as they fall slowly with speed yet stopping each sense of each second- reminding us as each grain falls that if not awakened it all becomes an oasis where one can drown if not aware of the breathe of air we are given but don’t always appreciate- wonderful words🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the brevity. less is more sometimes in literary the world. I appreciated reading this

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this, short yet deep!
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I loved this. Like grains in the hour Glass, we are all on this journey to live to the fullest before it's full. Great read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Do we get to flip it over half way so it never runs out ?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Loved the analogy.Short and to the point.Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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and time of course, which none of us have enough of on our hands.... those twelve words look and sound near perfect below the monochrome hourglass........Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Yes time passes, but if if it is important slow it down to your pace and enjoy what is left... Thank you for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Well looky at that, I just posted a similar one, nicely done my friend :) x

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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