Amitié

Friendship is a stronger form of interpersonal bond than an association.

Amitié

An entwining rush

Of emotional passions

Overwhelming hearts

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Ardra]

Mmm I do agree friendship is a lot sweeter .... :)
Kind of as they say when love walks away...friendship stays to dry the tears...

But your poem sounds a bit different..... more like friends with benefits heheh...I just felt That way when I read it...

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Many thanks for your review! :-)

[Amy R]

Nice write, seems as though they'll be lovers somewhere in time,
But I think we should lay aside the passions at the very beginning and allow the friendship to move along time and grow into what it's really meant to become....Love grows within time not at the very beginning, thus it would've been infatuation.....Thank you for sharing.

[Ghost]

I feel if you can be friends first then you maybe able to be lovers later... But put the overwhelming thoughts and passions behind until you can love, but let that love grow from friendship first.. Thanks for sharing

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice feeling to this...could use more of those rushes.
j.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you sir - a grand review! :-)

[Chris Shaw]

Friendship is much sweeter, but it is also much harder to find. I have many associates but can number on one hand true friends, who would be there for me no matter what. Friends are precious, hard to come by and are like precious stones, that need to be polished. I also agree with Rapunzel, that this little gem of yours could be taken for friends with benefits. Good morning from me.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A friend with benefits is something to be cherished - thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts :-)

[Chris Shaw]

Me being an older, didn't really understand the meaning of that term till recently, but quite agree with you, all friends should be cherished. Smiles.

[Neville]

Why say one thing, when you can write it so many other ways.... this little un shouts out and speaks volumes..... brevity personified....... Neville

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Gee thanks - very much appreciated :-)

[Neville]

pleasure....