Clouded Perception

Clouded Perception

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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What we choose to see ... or ... not!

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Clouded Perception



My mind’s awareness

To distinguish right from wrong

Sometimes stops working


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© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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When we are close to a low point in life we make bad judgement calls... I know this first hand as I am stuck in the middle of one right now... When we are low our minds do not work same as they should which opens the doorway for making wrong choices... Thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


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that's me every single moment of every single day.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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When we are close to a low point in life we make bad judgement calls... I know this first hand as I am stuck in the middle of one right now... When we are low our minds do not work same as they should which opens the doorway for making wrong choices... Thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

many times the flesh rules us and overtakes reason and morality. there always seems to be a battle raging between spirit and flesh. good, solid, thought-provoking write - a nice way to start my day ... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Your vision is right
My vision is wrong
I am sorry for smudging air with my song

Leonard Cohen

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and it does it just to test us...i believe.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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There is a thin line between right and wrong good and bad- can make you quite mad... true words written here🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

because that is the price of being human

Posted 6 Years Ago


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The inertia of mind ! It could be exhaustion, or boredom.
A wonderful haiku!


Posted 6 Years Ago


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Your mind must be drunk :p
If it's acting like that .. have some lemon juice...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 1, 2018
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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